Showing posts with label The Rise of Dazy. Show all posts
Showing posts with label The Rise of Dazy. Show all posts
Friday, March 29, 2013
Dazhi has the board!
Hey guys, Don't tell V but I have stolen her computer for a bit... Ok so she will find out just as soon as this publishes.
My book if you look right is at twenty thousand words and I am at a very awkward point in my life. The day I get out of Eline her back story. ;D Let's just say at the moment I am in trouble.
Kendra (V's older sister) just asked how long the book is if I looked wrong... Well Kendra. I am talking about right as in right verses left not right versos wrong.
And... Ut oh. I hear V putting away her Violin so I better scoot before I am discovered. If you have any questions please Email V. at V.KathieArdnek7@gmail.com Bye!
Friday, March 15, 2013
Look Right
So after three days of day camp, a day out in the yard working with my best friend, and hiding in my room today I think I shall pop in to say, HI.
I will tell you that the camp was bad... Well actually it was a lot of fun. It was a camp on American Heritage done by the Frontier girls group in my area. (a ton of fun)
I enjoyed the American Dances part best. (probably because I like to dance.) Not waltzing or anything like that, we did a line dance and a square dance. (So much fun.)
Yesterday I decided to give you guys a hint of where I am in my first draft of The rise of the Dazy so if you look right, at the top is my word count. I will try to update it at least once a week.
Also I have overhead a couple of my characters discussing doing their own posts on here. I don't know who or where or when. but Elsie said I was being a bit lazy in the posting department. *chuckle*
Well I have stuff to do and people to see so I have to run.
Question: What is Black and White and Red all over. Find out in my next post. (that I do)
Friday, March 1, 2013
Our Typical Trio
It is now the end of February... (Really?) Sigh and time for another snip-its This month I wrote 5311 words on the Dazy story and 2265 words on my personal story and read 4 novella and 2 novels. (novel concept) so I have been busy just not on my blog. I also wrote four more songs. But I will wait to share the lyrics till I have them how I want them.
Well without anymore to do, my snip-its.
I opened my eyes, and screamed.
Yes Brave ole’ me, who is willing to take on a snake screamed when she found
herself in a small octagonal room surrounded by people all dressed more or
less the same.
The Rise of the Dazy: The legend of Queen Dazy
Nobody sees this girl next
morning; nobody sees her slip to the barn hackamore in hand.
It is still so early that not even
the birds are awake but still she is here. The small gray pony knickers to her
as she approaches, "Hey girl!" she whispers as she rubs the black
snip. She then quickly catches the pony and slips the hackamore onto her long
warm face, then rains in hand she brushed the mare then slipped a pad and
surcingle onto his back then hopped on herself.
Galloping through the trees she
let her joy escape with a hearty giggle. As soon as she is sure she is out of
sight of the houses she moves into a two
point then stands upright her feet on the pad her arms outstretched.
"Compass!!!" One of her
cousins yells startling her, she losses her balance and plummets towards the ground.
Compass (my personal story)
Finally a large man with a thick
black beard stepped forward and introduced himself as Captain Hedrick. I frowned,
Eline smiled, Rhon fainted; yep we were our typical trio.
The Rise of the Dazy: The legend of Queen Dazy
I was made for a mission,
I was made to play a Position ,
I was made to go where God wants me to go!
"I was made", Song I wrote
For some time that next morning I
just lay there in bed wondering where I was for I had forgotten. It was a very
plain room; a bunk bed in one corner with a desk in another and a closet in
another. It had white walls and wooden floors and all in all very plain.
The Rise of the Dazy: The legend of Queen Dazy
And I think I will stop there, most of what I wrote isn't to good, (writers block will do that to you) Oh well there is still so much to do. I think I will show you what else I am working on... but not now. When I am finished probably.
Friday, February 8, 2013
Character Encounter: Rhon
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Kat (my BFF) and I are hiding. And from what you ask, from the fact that this is my sweet sixteen and mom has decided to let the kids do a Easter egg hunt. IT'S JULY!
We can see the kids in the garden looking among the neat rows of beans for the eggs while the two of us giggle away down by the four-tree. We see one of Kat's sibs fall so she runs to go cheer them up.
I sit back looking up into the branches above my head for several seconds.
"Happy birthday Princess V!" I hear I sit up to see the smiling face of Dazy tailed by a slightly younger Red headed girl who I know to be her little sister.
"hey Dazy, Hey Rhon, So glad you could make it!"
Rhon looks a bit frightens of all the other people running about and takes her sister's hand tight in both of hers.
Dazy smiles and encouragingly pushes her towards the fun. But alas she does not go. "Rhon is a bit shy." she tells me.
I nod remembering that day I met her, she had disappeared into a pile of stuffed toys to escape the introduction. "You can't blame her for being shy." I say. "You guys kind of grew up in the middle of nowhere."
Dazy nods, "Yep and meeting new people never happened."
"Well, Let's find her a bag and get her in on the hunt then it will be time for cake."
I lead the two over to where we have stashed the bags and watch as Dazy works with Rhon. Though she is but three years younger in this crowd Rhon seems much younger.
Finally though Rhon starts to enjoy herself. My cousin Grub1 even helps her reach a high up egg that we stashed in a tree.
Kat, Dazy, and Kendra finally joins me and we count up the eggs to make sure we have them all.
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(no mom this is not a hint of what I want to do for my Bday this year, personally I haven't a clue)
Anybody want to suggest a theme for my sweet sixteen?
Tuesday, February 5, 2013
The Snake did not!
And January is finished, (yes mom I just started a paragraph with a And) January is DONE! And Now I can tell you what I have accomplished *crickets* OK not much but I do have a little bit to put down.
Udiah wasn't sure how long she
had been lying there when she awoke. Somehow during the capture they must have
knocked her and Zelphie both out. Where ever they were it was entirely to dark
for her to see anything.
-Akeaka-
She stared from
one man to the other the color completely draining from her face. “I had better
deliver the duck before it regains contousness and we have something fowl loose
in the house.” With that she fled the room, both men roaring with laughter
behind her. As she fled she could hear her father saying “Always was a shy one.”
-Cloaked-
Song looked out over the
mountains, her hair whipping about her like waves on a restless sea, though she
was nothing but restless. She stood their hands relaxed at her sides her eyes
closed, she was content; Content with her parent’s choice of ruler, content
with their choice of home.
-I Will Sing-
I took a deep breath then ever so
slowly slipped the wire ring around the snake’s neck… Well I probably should
skip the messy details because I know little girls will read this and I do not
want to scare them. I will let you know I lived, the cat lived, Rhon lived, and
the snake did not, it however was bagged up into the snake bag and hung safely
outside on a hook to await the woodcutter to help deal with it from there.
-Dazy's story (still needs a title)-
I also have been working on a personal story but it is just that, personal.
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